Tuesday, August 25, 2009


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"ਪਰਮਿੰਦਰ - ਪਰਮ"(9872498356)
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  1. UnknownAugust 26, 2009 at 10:40 AM

    hey!...sat sri akal ji...
    first of all...m Sorry! for ma bad Punjabi...but..i m a quick learner..so will learn ur kinda Punjabi..pretty fast!..
    Anyways!....
    ..i hve read few of ur poetry(or blog..if dat wht it is called here)..and they r quite nice..rather thr is an artist inside u..dat v all can c...
    ...m quite surprise to knw...ki tusi eh sab aap likheya hai.. coz i hve never heard abt this side of urs from Harveer...he hv told me quite a lot abt u...but not abt this part of urs.... It seems u r quite an emotional prsn...n..i m sorry..if i am getting too prsnl here.. It seems u hve lost it all..(may be ditch by someone or somethng of dat sort)...bcoz Thoughts like dis...only come out..whn a prsn is..too much close to his ownself..n saariya to nirash hovae... Anyways!...i wont get deep into it...but...all in all...they are quite Gud..
    ...thoda jeha difficult hai...m not able to undrstnd whole of it...but jina vi samaj aaya...it was vry nice..
    ...u wont mind na!..if i cheat few lines from ur blog..for my orkut profile... :)..
    if it bothers u..tell me..i wont copy anythng!
    ...
    ..hey! by the way..i got to knw from ur profile dat u like sufi music.. ..i love it too n so do Harveer...
    ..chalo!..enough from my side now... i was supposed to write a "comment"..but..
    .....
    ..u take care..
    ...

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  2. ਪਰਮਿੰਦਰ "ਪਰਮ"..........ਇੰਦਰAugust 26, 2009 at 11:26 AM

    thanx for ur comment.....waiting more comments in future ji...tc rabb raakha

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  3. ਪਰਮਿੰਦਰ "ਪਰਮ"..........ਇੰਦਰAugust 26, 2009 at 11:27 AM

    yeah u can copy anything....but dont forget to mention mine name ji...hope u dont mind.......tc

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